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Saturday, January 16, 2010

55 fiction.

I dunno if you have heard of 55 fiction but it basically consists of writing a short story in 55 words or less.My first attempt. And yes i am THAT bored.






"oh darling" she sighed "i've missed you". Her craving quenched, she wished the moment could last forever.


But she knew, and accepted, that he would be here any moment to separate them.And soon he arrived "sorry mrs. dawn.... It's time"






And setting her glass of wine down gently, she allowed herself to be lead to the gallows.








Word count:58... I know i overshot by 3 words... but hey i am new at this.

P.S How come NONE of you are updating ?? Or is there some sort of blogspot boycott that i am unaware of ?

Cuz if that's the case then i am gonna be SO pissed.

19 comments:

bondgal_rulz said...

Some last wish. :)

GREAT first attempt man!!!

*polite applause*

Err, I don't think that's the case. Blogspot boycott that is.

Vagabond said...

nice...

and the song is awesome...that describes my status quo.

Sharanyaa said...

Greetings,
I'm too busy getting talli to blog. Kidding. Nice attempt and nice concept. Maybe I'll try one ;)

Weirdo guy said...

@bondgal

hey... its not as though death row inmates get a lot of choice when it comes to a last wish... mostly they get to choose between a shag, a fag or a drink.

And at that moment nobody will feel like doing IT right ? and smoking kills so might as well go for a nice little scotch or sex on the beach....

tee hee :P

Weirdo guy said...

@vagabond

Well well well...somebody has a good taste in music !!


and look you didn't make a single typo this time !!


*gives a standing ovation*

Weirdo guy said...

@sharanyaa

what's a talli ????!!! Sounds like a secret ingredient in a voodoo ritual, which ofcourse gives a whole new perspective to that sentence...

just kidding ! :D


P.S saw your 'attempt'... and it was pretty good AND it stuck to the word limit.

Damn i hate perfectionists.

Naresh said...

Why is "attempt" in quotes? Are you accusing me of making a pseudo attempt? I promise it's a genuine attempt!
And DON' HATE ON ME FOR PERFECTIONISTN' YO... YOU BEIN' TOO ATTITUDINOUS! ;)
WOO trash talk!

Weirdo guy said...

okay.. am confused.... if you (naresh) are the same as sharanyaa how come you commented on sharanyaa's blog as a different person ??!!





Multiple personality disorder anyone ??

Sharanyaa said...

OMG sorry... I was using Naresh's computer. It was me

Sharanyaa said...

I feel like a douche

Weirdo guy said...

*sigh*this just keeps getting better and better doesn't it ??
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yo ..you be disrespectin' my hood ??Cuz imma callin them shenanigans around here...you got that white boy ??


trash talk back at ya !


P.S feelings of 'douche'ness is the exclusive domain of stephanie mayer.. may i suggest you NOT intrude there and refrain from above mentioned thoughts?

Sharanyaa said...

alright then... DOLT; I feel like a dolt

Weirdo guy said...

atta girl ! *offers a cookie*

Goddess of Nonsense said...

So I'm not going to say wow.
But es I like the attempt :)

P.S. New DP makes u look like 'Da stud' man :P

Weirdo guy said...

@ lavender

*sigh* i knew i shouldn't have cropped the pic



it's actually a very sweet "brother-sister bonding" pic !!

Goddess of Nonsense said...

lol. So put up the un-cropped version na.

*tries to remember the last time she clicked a pic with her brother*

Sigh memory fails me ! :P

Weirdo guy said...

after that "da stud" comment from you ???


FAT CHANCE !

:P

Anonymous said...

heya! this ones good! :)

Weirdo guy said...

thanks !!!

P.S why the tone of surprise ??? :P