I dunno if you have heard of 55 fiction but it basically consists of writing a short story in 55 words or less.My first attempt. And yes i am THAT bored.
"oh darling" she sighed "i've missed you". Her craving quenched, she wished the moment could last forever.
But she knew, and accepted, that he would be here any moment to separate them.And soon he arrived "sorry mrs. dawn.... It's time"
And setting her glass of wine down gently, she allowed herself to be lead to the gallows.
Word count:58... I know i overshot by 3 words... but hey i am new at this.
P.S How come NONE of you are updating ?? Or is there some sort of blogspot boycott that i am unaware of ?
Cuz if that's the case then i am gonna be SO pissed.
They are givin' some lovin'
Saturday, January 16, 2010
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Some last wish. :)
GREAT first attempt man!!!
*polite applause*
Err, I don't think that's the case. Blogspot boycott that is.
nice...
and the song is awesome...that describes my status quo.
Greetings,
I'm too busy getting talli to blog. Kidding. Nice attempt and nice concept. Maybe I'll try one ;)
@bondgal
hey... its not as though death row inmates get a lot of choice when it comes to a last wish... mostly they get to choose between a shag, a fag or a drink.
And at that moment nobody will feel like doing IT right ? and smoking kills so might as well go for a nice little scotch or sex on the beach....
tee hee :P
@vagabond
Well well well...somebody has a good taste in music !!
and look you didn't make a single typo this time !!
*gives a standing ovation*
@sharanyaa
what's a talli ????!!! Sounds like a secret ingredient in a voodoo ritual, which ofcourse gives a whole new perspective to that sentence...
just kidding ! :D
P.S saw your 'attempt'... and it was pretty good AND it stuck to the word limit.
Damn i hate perfectionists.
Why is "attempt" in quotes? Are you accusing me of making a pseudo attempt? I promise it's a genuine attempt!
And DON' HATE ON ME FOR PERFECTIONISTN' YO... YOU BEIN' TOO ATTITUDINOUS! ;)
WOO trash talk!
okay.. am confused.... if you (naresh) are the same as sharanyaa how come you commented on sharanyaa's blog as a different person ??!!
Multiple personality disorder anyone ??
OMG sorry... I was using Naresh's computer. It was me
I feel like a douche
*sigh*this just keeps getting better and better doesn't it ??
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yo ..you be disrespectin' my hood ??Cuz imma callin them shenanigans around here...you got that white boy ??
trash talk back at ya !
P.S feelings of 'douche'ness is the exclusive domain of stephanie mayer.. may i suggest you NOT intrude there and refrain from above mentioned thoughts?
alright then... DOLT; I feel like a dolt
atta girl ! *offers a cookie*
So I'm not going to say wow.
But es I like the attempt :)
P.S. New DP makes u look like 'Da stud' man :P
@ lavender
*sigh* i knew i shouldn't have cropped the pic
it's actually a very sweet "brother-sister bonding" pic !!
lol. So put up the un-cropped version na.
*tries to remember the last time she clicked a pic with her brother*
Sigh memory fails me ! :P
after that "da stud" comment from you ???
FAT CHANCE !
:P
heya! this ones good! :)
thanks !!!
P.S why the tone of surprise ??? :P
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